Eleanor and Bank. Mrs Abrahamson and I will give you feedback shortly but i the mean time I think you really need to look into adding performance into this. A sole male will do, you can be all arty and film him in black and white if you like but I don't think you can go the length of the song without someone singing along, it just doesn't happen.
Here is Damien Rice in the countryside singing
http://youtu.be/5YXVMCHG-Nk
Or Ryan Adams in colour with a City scape background
Agreed- too much walking about! I think that is fine for a lot of the video but you need to have performance elements to break it up or at least some lip-sych interspersed with the moody shots of the girl.
Eleanor and Bank. Mrs Abrahamson and I will give you feedback shortly but i the mean time I think you really need to look into adding performance into this. A sole male will do, you can be all arty and film him in black and white if you like but I don't think you can go the length of the song without someone singing along, it just doesn't happen.
ReplyDeleteHere is Damien Rice in the countryside singing
http://youtu.be/5YXVMCHG-Nk
Or Ryan Adams in colour with a City scape background
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hmHgY_J63Ik
Agreed- too much walking about! I think that is fine for a lot of the video but you need to have performance elements to break it up or at least some lip-sych interspersed with the moody shots of the girl.
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